Wattpad & WriteOn: Chapter Ten
In which Alex and Treyan have some much needed conversations over food.
Lots of wine.
A second chapter revised in the same week? MB is on a roll!
Well, I had a window of free time this morning, so I brought myself to Panera to write, as I often do, and four (4) hours later, I was done revising Chapter Ten.
Amazing, it’s it?
I think the hardest part with this particular revisions was one of two things – first, I didn’t want Treyan to come across as a complete creeper, and two, I didn’t want Alex to seem so readily accepting. Whether I achieved either of these through this draft, you’ll have to tell me, otherwise it will be revisited come Revisions Round Three.
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