Wattpad & WriteOn: Chapter Ten


In which Alex and Treyan have some much needed conversations over food.

And wine.

Lots of wine.

A second chapter revised in the same week?  MB is on a roll!

Well, I had a window of free time this morning, so I brought myself to Panera to write, as I often do, and four (4) hours later, I was done revising Chapter Ten.

Amazing, it’s it?

I think the hardest part with this particular revisions was one of two things – first, I didn’t want Treyan to come across as a complete creeper, and two, I didn’t want Alex to seem so readily accepting.  Whether I achieved either of these through this draft, you’ll have to tell me, otherwise it will be revisited come Revisions Round Three.

Wattpad is here.

WriteOn is here.

Read. Follow. Vote. Like. Comment.

But more of all, enjoy!


Posted on March 12, 2016, in revisions. Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.

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